You ordered an item from an online store and it has arrived damaged.Write a letter to the retailer to complain. In the letter: - Explain why you are unhappy - Request a refund - Make arrangements to return the damaged item

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the study table which bought from your online store. On May 15,

2023

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I made the purchase and the item was delivered the next day to my home. I have great expectations about your service and customer care, but unfortunately your delivery person

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not

helped

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me to assemble the product which disappointed me.

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, one leg of the table has broken, I noticed that

while

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I was assembling the item. The leg has a big crack in the

center

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. It might fall down at any time. I am requesting you to refund my full purchase amount as soon as possible. I have made payment through my credit card. I have attached a copy of the invoice

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the product. Kindly arrange to return the defective product. I have limited space in my room. Yours faithfully, Manshad

ck.manshadSun Aug 27 2023

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Word Count

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Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

149 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

I am writing to express my disappointment
I regret to inform you that
I am dissatisfied with the item I received
The item arrived damaged
The product is in unsatisfactory condition
I expected better quality
I would like to request a refund
I kindly ask for your assistance in resolving this matter
I would appreciate it if you could provide instructions
I suggest arranging a pick-up service
I expect a prompt response and resolution
I hope for a satisfactory outcome

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You ordered an item from an online store and it has arrived damaged.Write a letter to the retailer to complain. In the letter: - Explain why you are unhappy - Request a refund - Make arrangements to return the damaged item

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