The Chart illustrates consumptions of three kinds of fast foods by teenagers in Mauritius form 1985 to 2015 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant Write at least 150 words
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The given line chart
performs
the number of Verb problem
shows
times
of consuming fast foods by young people in Mauritius from 1985 to 2015
In general, there are three different junk foods are
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that are
being
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apply
the
most frequently purchased by Correct article usage
apply
the
teenagers in Mauritius Correct article usage
apply
such
as hamburgers, pizza and fried chicken in
which Change preposition
apply
they
are showing different trends over the Correct pronoun usage
apply
periods
.
As Fix the agreement mistake
period
it
shown in the data, hamburgers and fried chicken faced an upward movement from the beginning of the years. In 1985, hamburgers were bought ten Correct pronoun usage
apply
times
before it continuously increased to the highest point at 70 times
in the last
year
. Similarly
with
fried chicken Change preposition
apply
which
Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
went up steadily and experienced overlapping the others to 60 times
from 2000 to 2005 then
it also
remained stable for the next 5 years before slowly hitting a peak in 2015. However
, the time consumption of the pizza significantly decreased from the beginning to the last
year
, where it is
hit a peak of 60 Unnecessary verb
apply
times
at the starting year
and then
finally
dropped to its lowest point of 10 times
at the end
of the year
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