The pie chart below shows the percentage of people aged 23-65 in different occupations in one UK town (Ashby) and in the UK as a whole in 2008.
The two pie charts compare the professions occupied by the citizens of one UK town, namely
Ashby
and the UK as a whole for 2008.
Overall
, the top 3 occupations of the Ashby
people include personal service, office and construction work
, whereas
,for the British people in general, technical work
is one of the most preferred professions as well.
To begin
, personal service constitutes nearly a quarter of the jobs altogether with 21% among the Ashby
citizens. Following
this
, office and construction works are some of the most preferred qualifications with 18% and 16% respectively. The proportion of unemployed people and shopworkers makes up the same figure – 14%. The least employed sphere of Ashby
is professional work
, amounting to only 8%.
In the overall
UK, the busiest area of work
life is office work
accounting for 19%. The percentage of personal service employees and technical workers comes right after with 17% for both professions. The number of unemployed individuals equals the number of construction workers across the whole country at 10%.Submitted by samid.mustafayev20 on
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