​​The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries: China and India. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

​​The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries: China and India. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart compares, four different types of consumption of food in the year 2008 in two countries and across the globe. To summarize, in the given period, the consumption of food stood first in China followed by India.
However
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, the ratio of processed meals was the highest throughout the world and the rest were insignificant. In China, the average foodstuff consumed was 34% and 32% in processed meals and vegetables and fruits.
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, the animal meal and nuts and seeds were 15% and 19%.
On the contrary
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, In India, the expenditure on processed meals and vegetables and fruits was 39% and 23%
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in animal feed and nuts and seeds 27% and 11% admittedly. Turning to the other one, In the world,
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processed food is significantly higher with 41%. On the flip side, other foods like vegetables and fruits, animal foods and nuts and seeds are 29%, 26% and 4% respectively.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Average consumption
  • Global composition
  • Food category
  • Meat, vegetables, fruits, grains
  • Percentage, proportion
  • Comparative analysis
  • Similarities and differences
  • Intake, consumption patterns
  • Striking differences
  • Notable similarities
  • Higher/lower consumption
  • Significant difference
  • Proportionate share
  • Relevant comparison
  • General trend
  • Insight
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