The charts below show the percentage of people aged 23-65 in different occupations in one UK town (Ashby) and in the UK as a whole in 2008
The presented pie charts provide information about the proportion of people between 23 and 65 ages
according to
their jobs in the
one specific town and the whole United Kingdom country in Correct article usage
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the
2008.
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Overall
, in the UK town called Ashby leader
profession in the market is Personal service, Replace the word
the leading
however
the proportion of unemployed people were
leading to Change the verb form
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market.
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the job
To begin
, in the
Ashby occupations related to professional Correct article usage
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work
was
8% of Correct subject-verb agreement
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total
workforce. The indicator for technical Add an article
the total
work
equaled to
9%. The interest toward Change preposition
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shop Fix the infinitive
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work
amounted to 14% which was the same as unemployment
rate in the town. Add an article
the unemployment
The construction
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Construction
work
, office work
, and personal service were the most attractive occupations during the
2008 which were respectively 16%, 18%, and 21%.
In the UK as a whole, construction Change the article
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work
was least
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the least
interested
occupation and the proportion was equal to 10%. The rate for unemployed people was Replace the word
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10%. The figure
for shop Fix the agreement mistake
figures
work
and professional work
were 13% and 14% respectively. The popular professions in the
2008 were jobs that Change the article
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are
related to Office Wrong verb form
were
work
, Personal Service, and technical work
and the rates were 19%, 17% and 17% respectively.Submitted by samid.mustafayev20 on
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