The maps below show and industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The Noribtal industrial area is undergoing some
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changes. Unused areas are to be destroyed and used for other projects. In Correct your spelling
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the transformation of a hazardous industrial area filled to the brim with numerous factories into a Change preposition
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self sustaining
ecosystem and housing district fit to live in.
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industrial district, the amount of land being left about is immense. Houses can be Change the article
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school
, shops and so on. We are Fix the agreement mistake
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of the surrounding terrain as there is a massive plot of farmland across the river. Correct your spelling
use
This
farmland is to be used as a way to sustain yourself with food. We can do so by building a bridge connecting these two plots of land. Large housing districts can be made from where the factories used to stand and all the Linking Words
nessecities
for human life.
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necessities
such
as going to the market in which a shopping Linking Words
disctrict
is made, a playground for children to entertain themselves or even a school so that education can be reached in close proximity without having to travel long distances back to town. A medical centre can Correct your spelling
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building might not be as big a Linking Words
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is most
definetly
qualified to give out first aid treatment.Correct your spelling
definitely
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