The maps below show and industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The Noribtal industrial area is undergoing some

mamssive

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massive

changes. Unused areas are to be destroyed and used for other projects. In

this

case, the project in hand is

off

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the transformation of a hazardous industrial area filled to the brim with numerous factories into a

self sustaining

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ecosystem and housing district fit to live in. As

this

was once

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industrial district, the amount of land being left about is immense. Houses can be

mad

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made

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along with

playgrounds,

school

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schools

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, shops and so on. We are

also

to make

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use

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of the surrounding terrain as there is a massive plot of farmland across the river.

This

farmland is to be used as a way to sustain yourself with food. We can do so by building a bridge connecting these two plots of land. Large housing districts can be made from where the factories used to stand and all the

nessecities

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necessities

for human life. Human life in

this

instance can be derived

of off

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daily

nessecities

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necessities

such

as going to the market in which a shopping

disctrict

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district

is made, a playground for children to entertain themselves or even a school so that education can be reached in close proximity without having to travel long distances back to town. A medical centre can

also

be built,

this

building might not be as big a

hospitals

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but it

most

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is most

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definetly

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definitely

qualified to give out first aid treatment.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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The maps below show and industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why is this? Do you think the government should spend more money supporting the local film industry?

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In the past when students did a university degree they tended to study in their own counrty. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?