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The line graph shows the number of customers in four restaurants between 1990 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the number of customers in four restaurants between 1990 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates
about
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the
count
 of shoppers made by four distinct food corners from
year
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 1990 to
year
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 2015.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
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Pizza Hut and Chicken
spot
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 were the significant customer holders but output fell down
at the end
. Meanwhile, the Donut Bro and the Burger Bar were
continously
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continuously
doing
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making
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 progress over the period. In the
year
 1990, the Donut Bro was the second lowest food point with only 2.5
thousands
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 buyers but it came up with
an
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 rapid increase
upto
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up to
 8 thousand in 2015 and
become
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most
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the most
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recoganised
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recognised
recognized
 among all restaurants.
In contrast
, The chicken point was the second highest with 6000 customers in
year
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 1990 but after dramatic
changes
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 the least
count
 made by it was approximately 3000. On the other side, the massive
count
 of 8 thousand clients managed by Pizza
hut
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 during the starting period
which
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suffered from the loss of 3 thousand by 2015.
However
, the Burger bar raised the
count
 of people from approximately 1000 to 4000 from 1990 to 2015 respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words count, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuated
  • steady rise
  • declined gradually
  • significant growth
  • overtook
  • peaked at
  • dipped to
  • remained stable
  • saw a surge in
  • experienced a slump
  • outperformed
  • lagged behind
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