you have seen an advertisement in an australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six year old child. write a letter to the parents.in your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in australia

i
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am
writting
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writing
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letter regarding which
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have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a
familyfor
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family for
six months and look after their
six year old
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six-year-old
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child.
firstly
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,
iwould
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I would
would
like
this
job
because
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am
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middle class
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person .
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i
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get
this
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,it will help
for
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my family
through
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financially.I would be a suitable person
to
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this
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because professionally
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am a nurse .I have worked in various
setting
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og
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of
hospitals.
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,
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am always calm and
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quiet
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.Always
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will be a patient person.I know how to take care
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of children
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and
adult
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adults
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.
if
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you get any medical
issuse
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issues
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will take care without any panic.
finally
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,
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would spend my free time i could
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church and i khow all the supermarkets
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home materials.if
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get
boring
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,
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wll
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will
go to
library
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the library
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it makes me very peaceful and pleasant mind.
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hope you will consider me for
this
job
. Regards,
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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