The chart below gives information on the global sale of hybrid vehicles between 2006 and 2009 in Japan, US and other countries.
The bar chart illustrates
how
many Rephrase
apply
numbers
of hybrid Fix the agreement mistake
number
vehicles
Change the noun form
vehicle
sales
from 2006 to 2009 in different countries across the world. Overall
, the data on total sales
in 2009 were twice as many as the number
in 2006, from 360.000 in 2006 to 740.000 in 2009. Japan
was the one of
country which rose sharply, at 340.000 Change preposition
apply
vehicles
and it became the top sales
transport in 2009. In 2006, the transportation trading in US
stood at 250.000. Correct article usage
the US
Then
, there was a peak in numbers at 350.000 in 2007. However
, during the next 2-year period, the number
of sales
dropped significantly from 350000 to nearly 280000. The number
of trade vehicles
in Japan
and other countries were
at 50.000 in 2006. Change the verb form
was
Then
, there was a gradual rise in Japan
between 2006 and 2008, reaching 75.000 and 100.000, respectively. In 2009, sales
rocketed to 350.000 in Japan
. Besides
, the number
of sales
in other countries increased steadily for over four years, at 110,000 vehicles
in 2009.Submitted by ieltsamiedu on
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