The charts below show the percentage of water used for diffent purpose in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selection and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for diffent purpose in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selection and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts give information about how
many
Correct quantifier usage
much
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and what kind of
water
in six different regions.
Overall
, It shows huge and
ovious diffrencent
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obvious differences
in features between North
America
and
Europe
to other worlds
such
as
Asia
, South
America
and Africa.
Firstly
, both North
America
and
Europe
are not over half the rate of
water
used for agriculture each 39 per
cent
and 32 per
cent
.
In contrast
, the
water
used for the same purpose in South
America
, Africa, Central
Asia
, and South &
East
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and East
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Asia
is over 70 per
cent
.
Secondly
, In North
America
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,America
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the percentage of
water
used for Industrial use and Domestic use is 61 per
cent
. And
Europe
, like North
America
, is 68 per
cent
over 60 per
cent
. But the other four areas, South
America
, Africa, Central
Asia
and South East
Asia
are completely different from North
America
and
Europe
. The percentage of
water
they consume for industry and domestic is not only exceeding half but not even 30 per
cent
.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, america, europe, asia, cent with synonyms.
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