The charts below show the percentage of water used for diffent purpose in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selection and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts give information about how
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water
in six different regions.
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in features between North Correct your spelling
obvious differences
America
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America
and Africa.
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, both North Linking Words
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are not over half the rate of Use synonyms
water
used for agriculture each 39 per Use synonyms
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and 32 per Use synonyms
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In contrast
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America
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Asia
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and East
Asia
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Secondly
, In North Linking Words
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America
the percentage of Add a comma
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water
used for Industrial use and Domestic use is 61 per Use synonyms
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Europe
, like North Use synonyms
America
, is 68 per Use synonyms
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over 60 per Use synonyms
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. But the other four areas, South Use synonyms
America
, Africa, Central Use synonyms
Asia
and South East Use synonyms
Asia
are completely different from North Use synonyms
America
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Europe
. The percentage of Use synonyms
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