The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015.

The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015.
The provided bar charts illustrate the shares of males and females in employment in
Sweden
,
Canada
and South
Korea
in 2005 and after ten years. 
Overall
, we can see that in 2005, the largest number of both men and
women
who had a job lived in
Sweden
,
while
in 2015, the highest number of males who had a job was in South
Korea
and in
Canada
the vast majority of
women
were in employment.
According to
the first bar chart, in 2005, almost four out of every 5 of all men in
Sweden
had a job.
However
, the number of
women
who were employed was under twice as low. In
Canada
, the share of male employees was just over 60% and the share of female employees was just under 20% smaller. In the remaining South
Korea
, the proportion of male labourers accounted for nearly 75%,
whereas
the portion of female labourers was 2,5 times low, accurately(30%). Regarding to second bar chart, in 2015, the situation in the three countries was different. In
Sweden
and
Canada
, working men contributed 70%,
while
working
women
in the former comprised nearly half of all
women
and in the latter constituted nearly 55%. In South
Korea
, male workers made up slightly less than 80%
as well as
, and female workers made up approximately 35%.
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  • bar charts
  • percentages
  • employment
  • countries
  • 2005
  • 2015
  • trends
  • differences
  • changes
  • men
  • women
  • variations
  • patterns
  • significant
  • observations
  • summarize
  • findings
  • predictions
  • future trends
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