Question -Your manager has asked you to arrange a party for a colleague leaving the company. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter suggest a suitable date and time for the party recommend a venue propose the food and entertainment options that should be available

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Dear manager, Thank you for

providind

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providing

me with a chance to organize a retirement party for

the

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colleague. I am writing to let you know a suitable date and venue.

In addition

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, a brief overview about the available food and

entertainement

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entertainment

options is noted. The coming week is a long weekend and

according to

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me, Saturday night, which is 21st September is a suitable date.

Further

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, 8 p.m. shall be a suitable time

to begin

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as most of the employees will be spending time with their

respected

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families during the day. Being an outgoing and social person, I would like to suggest "Befikre" located on

the

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apply

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Torbram Road, Mississauga as our venue.

Firstly

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, it

open

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is open

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till late

night

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at night

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, and

secondly

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, close to our

accomodations

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accommodations

accommodation

. On the weekend night, they feature a band till 11 p.m. and later we can enjoy and dance

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the DJ music.

Although

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, it is a

mexican

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Mexican

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restaurant and the food is quite expensive

but

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apply

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the quality they offer is unbeatable. I would suggest

to go

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going

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for

buffet

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a buffet

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system

instead

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of ordering single dishes. Thank you for your consideration Yours faithfully Harshveer

harshveermangat141Wed Sep 06 2023

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task response

Ensure that the letter addresses all aspects of the task, including the recommendation of food and entertainment options.

coherence and cohesion

The letter lacks a proper greeting and closing, and the coherence and cohesion could be improved by organizing the ideas into distinct paragraphs.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

186 words

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