The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the proportion of
men
and women
in various age
groups performing exercise
on
daily routine in Australia in 2010.
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Overall
, we observe between the age
of 15 and 24, the percentage of Fix the agreement mistake
ages
men
performing physical activity is higher than women
. However
, ladies of age
25 and higher were found more active in exercise
as
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than
of
males.
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To begin
with, we see 52.8% of boys aging
15 to 24 were exercising regularly. Replace the word
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25
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the 25
age
group it reduced to 42.2%, citizens that lied
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Nevertheless
, age
groups from 45 to 54, 55 to 64 and 65 onwards, people Change preposition
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exercise
on regular
basis increased, which was 43.1%, 45.1% and 46.7% respectively.
In comparison, looking at Correct article usage
a regular
female
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females
age
group of 15 – 24 only 47.7% were doing exercise
. Whereas
with the rise in age
, women
were found more active in exercise
. Age
25 to 34, the proportion of their Wrong verb form
Aged
exercise
was almost 6 percent higher. Furthermore
, individuals of
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age
35 to 44 shows
a difference of nearly 12% by performing more health activities Correct subject-verb agreement
show
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men
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, men
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the men
women
ratio are
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age
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, age, exercise with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduces" was used 2 times.
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