the charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world
These
group of pie-charts represents the usage of Correct determiner usage
This
water
in percentage for the various needs in the six parts of the earth.
There are six pie charts of
each representing an area. The different purposes shown in each chart are Industrial Change preposition
apply
use
, Agricultural use
and Domestic use
.This
study provides us Add the preposition
with an
an
detailed picturisation Change the article
a
on
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of
usage
of Add an article
the usage
water
by given territories.
The highest used utility of water
is mostly for Farming and Agriculture. For domestic purpose
, Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
water
is consumed lower when compared to others. The
America and Europe are the areas, where Correct article usage
apply
water
is consumed more for industrial and corporate cases, than any other parts. Whereas
, the Asian and African continents be
the lands for agriculture. Around 88% of Wrong verb form
are
water
is used for it in those places. The
South America marks itself as the highest domestic Correct article usage
apply
water
consumer.
By calculating averages, 22.50%, 65.83% and 11.67% percentages of water
are used for industrial, agricultural and domestic use
by all of these six parts of the world. These inferences describes
the consumption for domestic Change the verb form
describe
use
is
less than all other usages. Correct your spelling
as
Whereas
, the
agriculture is the Correct article usage
apply
most
biggest consumer and the industrial purpose moderates.Change the adjective
apply
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