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The chart above shows the number of men and woman in further education in Britain in three periods and whther they studying full-time or part-time compares both genders although decided received تلقى substantial increase around 100 doubling comparison مقارنه escalated (تصاعدت) from 50 thousand in 1970/71 to almost 200 thousand in 1980/81, at the same level as males a decade later. approximately considerably الى حد كبير . In contrast,

The chart above shows the number of men and woman in further education in Britain in three periods and whther they studying full-time or part-time compares both genders although decided received تلقى substantial increase around 100 doubling comparison مقارنه escalated (تصاعدت) from 50 thousand in 1970/71 to almost 200 thousand in 1980/81, at the same level as males a decade later. approximately considerably الى حد كبير . In contrast,
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The bar chart depicts the figures of
male
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males
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 and
female
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females
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 who
complete
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the high
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 education in the UK from 1970 to 1990 either for
full-time
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a full-time
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 or
part time
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 system. It is clear from the graph that the student, as an aggregate, increased throughout the time span.
According to
 what is shown, part-time male
students
 were at the one million mark in the first period (1970/71)
while
 full-time
students
 were only
the
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 tenth of
this
 figure. After getting a dip by about 130
thousand
, the not fully committed
students
recoverd
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recovered
 by 60
thousand
 reaching 930
thousand
. The full-time dedication by men learners kept rising till it hit
240,000
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the 240,000
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 mark in the
last
 decade. Regarding female learners, part-time
students
 socketed substantially by 200,000 after it climbed slightly in
the
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1980- 1981 by the quarter of the
last
 increment. The
full time
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 student got more popular at the beginning of the period by 100
thousand
 increase which climbed very modestly later.
To sum up
, we could say that females
over numbered
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overnumbered
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 males in the count of
students
 in 1990 contrary to what was three
secades
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seconds
 back.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "climbed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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