The pie chart below depicts energy generation by fuel type in the UK in two years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart below depicts energy generation by fuel type in the UK in two years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
displays
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diagram describes
about
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the
energy
produce
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produced
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by
fuel
type
. In 2014
as well as
2018, the highest
energy
is
produce
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by gas is 30.1%. Nuclear
is
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was
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22.5% in
the
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2014, and in 2018 it
is
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was
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21.6%. In 2014 and
also
in 2018, oil and other have
genereted
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generated
4.0% . There is a great change in coal from 2014 to 2018.
Renewables
is 15% in the year 2014. In 2018, 26.2%
is
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renewables
. There is 5
type
they are oil and other,
renewables
, nuclear, gas and coal. The great update is seen in
renewables
and coal. The data is about 2014 and 2018 about five types
energy
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generation by
fuel
.
The
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both
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Both
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pie
chart
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describe
about
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apply
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the
fuel
type
.
To conclude
, the above information is on years 2014 and 2018 from the UK. The data is about the
energy
generation by
fuel
type
in the year 2014 and 2018.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, fuel, type, renewables with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "describes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • depicts
  • energy generation
  • fuel type
  • traditional fuels
  • renewable energy
  • alternative fuels
  • significant increase
  • substantial decrease
  • transition fuel
  • environmental policies
  • notable changes
  • share of energy
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