The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the word. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons relevant
The bar charts illustrate the proportion of water consumption for various purposes in six different global areas.
Overall
, it can be seen that Asia, Africa, and South America
spent the majority of water for grew
the plant, Wrong verb form
growing
while
North America
and Europe used for
Correct pronoun usage
it for
Correct article usage
the menufacturing
menufacturing
process.
Correct your spelling
manufacturing
To begin
with
the primary purpose in both Add a comma
,with
of
Asia, Africa, and South Change preposition
apply
America
were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
agricultiral
aim, which Correct your spelling
agricultural
this
figure was more than 70% in each area. The remaining target combined around 15%, with the exception of South America
that
reached almost 30%.
Turning to North Correct pronoun usage
which
America
and Europe, the water was spent in these area
Change the determiner
this area
these areas
spent
for industries, Verb problem
apply
these figure
indicated at around half. Meanwhile, the percentage that were Change the determiner
this figure
these figures
spend
in orchard and households were Change the form of the verb
spent
secound
and the Correct your spelling
second
least
ranking.Correct word choice
lowest
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