The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the word. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons relevant

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the word.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons relevant
The bar charts illustrate the proportion of water consumption for various purposes in six different global areas.
Overall
, it can be seen that Asia, Africa, and South
America
spent the majority of water for
grew
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the plant,
while
North
America
and Europe used
for
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it for
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the menufacturing
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menufacturing
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manufacturing
process.
To begin
with
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the primary purpose in both
of
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apply
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Asia, Africa, and South
America
were
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was
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agricultiral
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agricultural
aim, which
this
figure was more than 70% in each area. The remaining target combined around 15%, with the exception of South
America
that
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which
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reached almost 30%. Turning to North
America
and Europe, the water was spent in
these area
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this area
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spent
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for industries,
these figure
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this figure
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indicated at around half. Meanwhile, the percentage that were
spend
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spent
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in orchard and households were
secound
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second
and the
least
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lowest
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ranking.
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