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The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper from 1980 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.

The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper from 1980 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.
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The display graph describes the production of three forest industry
products
 in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper from 1980 to 2000. Overview, the value
are
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is
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 in the billion. There are 5
type
Change to a plural noun
types
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 of product
category
Fix the agreement mistake
categories
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. In
the
Correct article usage
apply
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petroleum
products
 in 2015 it
is
Wrong verb form
was
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nearby
Correct your spelling
nearly
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 60 and in 2016 it
is
Wrong verb form
was
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 more than 60. In
the
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apply
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engineered goods
is
Verb problem
it was
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 around 55 in 2015 and in 2016 it
is
Wrong verb form
was
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 more than 60. In gems and
jewellery
Add a comma
,jewellery
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 it is 45 in 2015 and 40 in 2016. In agricultural
products
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,products
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 it is more than 30 in 2015
as well as
 2016. In
textiles
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,textiles
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 it is 25 in 2015 and 35 in 2016. Percentage change in values,
in
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In
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 petroleum
products
 it is 3%, in engineered goods it is 8.5%, in
agriculturak
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agricultural
agriculture
products
 it is 0.81% and in
textiles
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,textiles
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 it is 15.24%.
To conclude
,
however
, there is
great
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a great
the great
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 increase in
taxtiles
Correct your spelling
textiles
as well as
 engineered goods.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 87%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words products with synonyms.
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