The provided line graph depicts alterations in percentage terms the changing patterns of domestic access to modern technology in homes in the UK.
The line graph demonstrates the differing patterns of domestic
access
to modern technology in proportional terms.
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Overall
, the graph highlights a steady rise in the adoption of modern technologies in the UK, with the CD player showing the highest usage throughout the period. Despite starting with no presence, internet Linking Words
access
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Although
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phones
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initially
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access
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computers
, they later surpassed them, with mobile Use synonyms
phones
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computers
remain at a lower level.
The highest level was occupied by the CD player, which began in 1996/97 at 60 Use synonyms
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time, internet Linking Words
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Furthermore
, the line graph shows the percentage of the remaining types: Linking Words
home
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computers
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phones
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Initially
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computers
had higher usage compared to mobile Use synonyms
phones
in 1996/97. Use synonyms
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phones
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computers
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