You wish to apply for a new college course, but you are unsure about the details of cost, duration and subjects posted on the college website. Write an email to the relevant person in admissions at the college, asking them to clarify these points for you. In this email, Say what your interest is Explain why the website is unclear Request the information that you need Begin your letter ‘Dear --------’ Do not write any addresses Write at least 150 words

#college #course #cost #duration #subjects #website #email #person #admissions #points #interest #request #information #‘dear #addresses

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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regarding some missing content on your portal about a particular course which is offered by your college.

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, I am from India, and I have completed my bachelor's in fine arts with a main subject in sculpture making. To pursue my higher studies in master's with the same interest I have planned to apply to your organisation. During my search on the internet, I came across your website. During my surfing on your institute site, one particular program named Master in Digital Sculpture sounds interesting to me, but unfortunately, some details regarding program duration, fees and details of included subjects were found missing.

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, the starting date of intact is soon, I would like to request you to mail me details of the program's fees, course duration and the subjects of studies

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, I want to know about the admission procedures, accommodation, faculties and placement assistance after the completion of the course. I am very excited to join the batch so looking for your favourable reply. Yours faithfully, Jen Kale.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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