The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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A comparison of the two stages of the village of Rayemounth in the year 1995 and today is made by two maps.
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, most noticeable is the transformation of the farmland and the forest park on the northeast side of the village into a golf course and tennis courts . Housing has increased quite a lot in the northwest, where even a new road has been built from the West, crossing the already existing one, which goes from the northwest part of the place to the southeast. There is a hotel and the opposite of it a cafe has not been changed. In the
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area the only new addition is a parking lot. Going to the southwest a shop has been turned into a restaurant and on the other side of the road, where there used to be a fish market, now there are apartment buildings. In the
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a fishing port has been removed.
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  • development
  • village
  • Ryemouth
  • 1995
  • present
  • houses
  • small school
  • residential areas
  • amenities
  • population
  • increased
  • growth
  • expansion
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