The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph depicts how much proportion of Australian males and females in six different
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had physical exercise in 2010. Use synonyms
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, generally, women in the senior generations participated in the most regular exercises, Linking Words
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were more likely to exercise regularly.
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in men witnessed over half of people had regular exercise, which was the 15-24 Use synonyms
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. On the one hand, more than half of women had an experience of physical fitness in three different Use synonyms
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, 53.3%, 53%, and 52.5% in a 45-54, a 55-64, and a 35-44 Use synonyms
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both males and females, there were fairly uniform percentages of people who had physical fitness between 39.5% and 46.7% in men, and 47.1% and 48.9% in women.
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, males in the youngest and oldest Linking Words
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