The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph depicts how much proportion of Australian males and females in six different
age
groups
had physical exercise in 2010. Overall
, generally, women in the senior generations participated in the most regular exercises, whereas
among men, the youngest age
group
were more likely to exercise regularly.
Firstly
, it is noticeable that there was only one age
group
in men witnessed over half of people had regular exercise, which was the 15-24 age
group
. On the one hand, more than half of women had an experience of physical fitness in three different age
groups
, 53.3%, 53%, and 52.5% in a 45-54, a 55-64, and a 35-44 age
group
, respectively. In the rest of the age
groups
both males and females, there were fairly uniform percentages of people who had physical fitness between 39.5% and 46.7% in men, and 47.1% and 48.9% in women.
To sum up
, there were no positive correlations between an age
group
and the number of people exercising, in addition
to this
, males in the youngest and oldest groups
had higher figures for regular fitness, while
females in the middle age
groups
experienced the most.Submitted by slowloris4444 on
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