You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram shows the different stages in the production of woolen goods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The above step-by-step diagram represents several levels of manufacturing of woollen goods.
Overall
, the process comprises thirteen different steps. It shows the procedure of how the wool
starts its journey from producing the wool
and thereafter
producing the final finished product.
Mainly, the wool
is normally obtained from the fur of sheep. The second step includes the
“shearing” in which the Correct article usage
apply
wool
is extracted from the sheep's body which is dirty in condition. Further
, the wool
is then
transferred to the cleaning sector to clean the contaminated wool
and bring out the washed cool. Now, the washed cool is processed to the drying area to dry the wet fur into a dried hair and handed to the spinning section where the spinning is done to bring together the scattered wool
in a line to form wool
and a string.
At the same time, the wool
is segregated into two types one is the string which is the unsuitable wool
and thereafter
goes recycling. On the other hand
, the wool
that is
competent is brought to the next level of production. In the next steps, the fabricated wool
is converted into the cluster and further
is
transported to the storage system. Unnecessary verb
apply
Finally
, the manufactured wool
is transformed into the result that is
balls of yarn which are further
used for making clothes out of knitting and other products such
as carpets and jackets.Submitted by poojapatil0213 on
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