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Fewer students are studynig science at school and university, favouring more computer-based subjects instead. Is this a positive or negative development? what are the reasons for this?

#students #studynig #science #school #university #subjects #development
Nowadays, some schools and
university
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lessons
such
 as science have
lower
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fewer
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 educators than before.
Instead
of
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that
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, most of the
studens
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students
 prefer to
involve
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 in computer-based courses. In my
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opinion
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opinions
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 it is a
completly
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completely
 positive development and there are some logical reasons behind that.
Firstly
, learning science is
essntial
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essential
 because our society requires doctors, surgeons and engineers.
However
, living in
modern
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 and technological world motivates most of the students to prioritize computer-based courses. Programming and artificial intelligence are attractive because of the changes and differences that they would implement
to
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 other academic
lessons
, especially science.
For instance
, with surgeon robots and chat GTP the requirements of other academic areas would be decreasing. The computer-based
lessons
 have increased the pace of our modern life and developed the standards. There are some reasons for prioritising computer-based subjects. These kinds of technologies are new and competitive, so learning them can be effective to get a higher score or even better job opportunities in the future.
Moreover
,
the
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employees who have
academical
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academic
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 skills in
programing
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programming
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, machine learning and computer
softwares
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software
 can get a higher and
satisfying
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more satisfying
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 salary and have a better
life
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living
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 standard. In conclusion, scientific objects have
less
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 followers in comparison with
last
 decades and the increasing number of students
has
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have
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 more
intrests
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interest
to gain
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in gaining
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 knowledge in computer-based
lessons
. In order to do that, they
have
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hope to get
a
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better job
opportunity
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opportunities
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 in the future. In my opinion, it is a
completly
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 positive change because we live in the generation of technology.
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