The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Average percentages of sodium, saturated fats and added sugars in typical meals consumed in the USA.

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The given three pie charts illustrate information about the percentages of foods that contain

sodium

, saturated fat and added sugar, which are not healthy when consumed a lot by the USA's population.

Overall

, at dinner

sodium

and saturated fat are eaten too much, whilst at breakfast all these nutrients are consumed less. It is crystal clear that first at breakfast

sodium

, saturated fat and added sugar consumed the least 14%,16% and,16% respectively. The

second,

lunch contains 29 percentages of

sodium

, 37 per cent of saturated fat and only 19 proportions of added sugar.

Third,

dinner has a lot of amount of

sodium

(43%) and saturated fat (37%), and

also

23% of added carbohydrates.

Lastly

, added carbohydrate is contained the most in snacks which is under half.

Moreover

, saturated fat is just under 20% and

sodium

is less than a quarter.

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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Average percentages of sodium, saturated fats and added sugars in typical meals consumed in the USA.

More and more students are taking a year off between finishing high school and going to university. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will no longer be necessary because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

COMPLETING UNIVERSITY EDUCATION IS THOUGHT BY SOME TO BE THE BEST WAY TO GE A GOOD JOB. ON THE OTHER HAND, OTHER PEOPLE THINK THAT GETTING EXPERIENCE AND DEVELOPING SOFT SKILLS IS MORE IMPORTANT. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.