The bar chart shows the information of the number of volunteers and paid workers in 4 different roles in the sports sector of an Australian town in 2015.

The bar chart shows the information of the number of volunteers and paid workers in 4 different roles in the sports sector of an Australian town in 2015.
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The bar chart represents the count of free and paid employees who performed distinct tasks in Coaching, Referees, Therapists, and Other sections of sports in an Australian suburb during the year 2015.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the total amount of people as volunteers was the maximum from paid staff, but it was quite the opposite in the sector of Referees, the workers getting money were the highest. During the period, the Other sections of sports held 49 paid employees which was more than the rest of the three areas but still acquired at the lowest level as compared to the counting of volunteer ones with 59.
Likewise
, the demand for workers with zero salaries in the Therapists section was 45 which was more than paid employees with a difference of 5. Most of the positions in the Coaching sector of sports were acquired by unpaid staff with approximately 72 and the people with salaries was almost 45.
In contrast
, the role of unpaid Referees was approximately 30 which was the lowest from paid staff roughly by number of 8.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • volunteers
  • paid workers
  • roles
  • sports sector
  • Australian town
  • duties
  • motivations
  • significance
  • contribution
  • professionalism
  • specialization
  • sustainability
  • distribution
  • trends
  • volunteerism
  • community engagement
  • professional development
  • accessibility
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