The bar chart shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of money spent on five important consumer items (food, housing, transportation,
health
care, and clothing) in four
countries
(The United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan) in one particular year (2009).
Overall
, it can be seen the higher percentage of the four
countries
consuming was housing, while
health
care and clothing accounted for the lower proportion.
In terms of housing, people from four
countries
spent more than a fifth on it, especially in The United States the cost of housing was more than a quarter. In addition
, the share of food and transportation was also
relatively high, equal to or greater than 10% in all four
countries
. Among them, Japan and the UK, in particular
, spent more than 20% on food, whereas
America and Canada spent more than 15% on transportation.
While
both health
care and clothing account for a relatively low share of consumption. Canada, the UK, and Japan spend less than 5% on health
. Similarly
, the cost of clothing in the four
countries
was quite low, around 5%.Submitted by s_syedy on
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