The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates how geothermal energy

used

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to produce electricity using a specifically designed man-made construction. The structure consists of a cold

water

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storage,

4.5

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a 4.5

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Km injection well,

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production well,

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condenser

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a condenser

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and a

generator

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that consists of a

turbine

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construction is constructed just above the geothermal zone (not rocks).

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the cold

water

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from the cold

water

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storage is pumped down through the injection well which is 4.5km long inside the ground.

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the

water

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passes through the geothermal zone which consists of hot rocks. These hot rocks heat up the

water

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and

pumps

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the

water

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back to the surface through the production well. The

pumped up

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hot

water

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reaches the

condenser

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. In the

condenser

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, the hot

water

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storedq

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stored

, and condensed. During

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process

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the hot

water

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is converted into steam .The

condenser

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is connected to a

generator

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that consists of a

turbine

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. The steam enters the

generator

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chamber and powers

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the

turbine

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Then

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the

generator

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is powered by

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turbine

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the turbine

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and produces electricity.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, condenser, generator, turbine with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

167 words

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geothermal energy
renewable source
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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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