The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how geothermal energy
used
to produce electricity using a specifically designed man-made construction.
The structure consists of a cold Add a missing verb
is used
water
storage, 4.5
Km injection well, Correct article usage
a 4.5
the
production well, Correct article usage
a
condenser
and a Correct article usage
a condenser
generator
that consists of a turbine
This
construction is constructed just above the geothermal zone (not rocks).
First,
the cold water
from the cold water
storage is pumped down through the injection well which is 4.5km long inside the ground. Then
the water
passes through the geothermal zone which consists of hot rocks. These hot rocks heat up the water
and pumps
the Change the verb form
pump
water
back to the surface through the production well.
The pumped up
hot Add a hyphen
pumped-up
water
reaches the condenser
. In the condenser
, the hot water
is storedq
, and condensed. During Correct your spelling
stored
this
process
the hot Add a comma
,process
water
is converted into steam .The condenser
is connected to a generator
that consists of a turbine
. The steam enters the generator
chamber and powers uр
the Change preposition
apply
turbine
. Then
the generator
is powered by turbine
and produces electricity.Add an article
the turbine
a turbine
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