The given line chart provides the information of elderly population in percentages (People with aged 65 and over) in three particular areas: USA, Sweden and Japan in the span of one century from 1940 to 2040.
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The provided line chart offers insights into the percentage of
elderly
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the elderly
population
(individuals aged 65 and above) in three specific regions: the USA
, Sweden
, and Japan
, spanning a century from 1940 to 2040.
Overall
, it is evident that all three countries exhibit an upward trajectory in their elderly populations. At the outset of the period, the USA
had the highest proportion of elderly residents, followed by Sweden
and Japan
. However
, by the end of the century, Japan
had surpassed the USA
, becoming the dominant demographic in terms of the elderly population
.
In 1940, the elderly population
in the USA
stood at approximately 9%, gradually increasing year by year and peaking at around 15% in 1980 before slightly decreasing to approximately 14% in 2020. The chart projects a significant upswing to around 23% by 2040.
In contrast
, Sweden
experienced a steady ascent, starting at less than 6% in 1940 and steadily reaching 25% by 2040. Notably, between 1980 and 2000, Sweden
's elderly population
exceeded that of the USA
, making it the predominant demographic before Japan
's anticipated surpassing in 2040.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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