IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 7.5

A glance at the four pie charts provided reveals a comparison of the population of the two countries, Yemen and Italy for the three various age groups in two different Periods, in 2000 and foresight for 2050. Overall, it is apparent from the information supplied that the remarkable change society related to 15-59-years-old during this years for both countries. In 2000, in Yemen, the old Population made up 3.6% of the total number of people in comparison with 24.1% in Italy. The 0-14 year group in Italy reached 14.3 %, which was almost 3 times higher than that of Yemen. Moreover, in Italy, the figure for 15-59 year-age was by far the most important in 2000, accounting for 61.6%, while Yemen's young population just reached 46.3 % at the same time. In 2050,the 0-14 age group in Yemen is forecasted to account for 37%, which is higher than that figure in Italy roughly 25%. While a tiny fraction of the old population is projected to record in Yemen, 42.3% of Italy's population is expected to be the elderly. The figure for Yemen and Italy's 15-59-year-old Population is predicted to occupy 57.3% and 46.2%, respectively.

A glance at the four pie charts provided reveals a comparison of the population of the two countries, Yemen and Italy for the three various age groups in two different Periods, in 2000 and foresight for 2050. Overall, it is apparent from the information supplied that the remarkable change society related to 15-59-years-old during this years for both countries. In 2000, in Yemen, the old Population made up 3.6% of the total number of people in comparison with 24.1% in Italy. The 0-14 year group in Italy reached 14.3 %, which was almost 3 times higher than that of Yemen. Moreover, in Italy, the figure for 15-59 year-age was by far the most important in 2000, accounting for 61.6%, while Yemen's young population just reached 46.3 % at the same time. In 2050,the 0-14 age group in Yemen is forecasted to account for 37%, which is higher than that figure in Italy roughly 25%. While a tiny fraction of the old population is projected to record in Yemen, 42.3% of Italy's population is expected to be the elderly. The figure for Yemen and Italy's 15-59-year-old Population is predicted to occupy 57.3% and 46.2%, respectively.
#glance #four #comparison #population #two #countries #yemen #three #age #groups #periods #foresight #information #change #society #years #people #year #group #times #figure #year-age #time #account #fraction #record
A glance at the four pie charts provided reveals a comparison of the
people
 of the two countries,
Yemen
 and Italy for the three various age groups in two different Periods, in 2000 and foresight for 2050.
Overall
, it is apparent from the information supplied that the remarkable change in society related to 15-59-year-olds during these years for both countries. In 2000, in
Yemen
, the old
people
 made up 3.6% of the total number of
people
 in comparison with 24.1% in Italy. The 0-14 year group in Italy reached 14.3 %, which was almost 3 times higher than that of
Yemen
.
Moreover
, in Italy, the figure for 15-59 year-age was by far the most important in 2000, accounting for 61.6%,
while
Yemen
's young
people
 just reached 46.3 % at the same time. In 2050,the 0-14 age group in
Yemen
 is forecasted to account for 37%, which is higher than that figure in Italy roughly 25%.
On the other
hand
Add a comma
,hand
show examples
 a tiny fraction of the old
people
 is projected to be recorded in
Yemen
, 42.3% of Italy's
people
 are expected to be elderly. The figure for
Yemen
 and Italy's 15-59-year-old
people
 is predicted to occupy 57.3% and 46.2%, respectively.
Submitted by looordomid on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 94%.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, yemen with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "provided" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "comparison" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
▼
What to do next:
Look at other essays: