The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given
barchart
compares Correct your spelling
bar chart
habitual
behaviour of tea and coffee consumers among five different Correct article usage
the habitual
Australian
cities
for one month
of observation.
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apply
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observed
three
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the three
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fresh coffee in Correct article usage
the 'Bought
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cities
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to mention
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mentioning
cities
people
wants
to buy their Change the verb form
want
caffee
or tea from a cafe.
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coffee
group
of people
the
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who
tends
to be in their local cafe Wrong verb form
tended
in
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last
month
was more than 50% among all Australian
cities
and mentioned
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people
whom
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coffe
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coffee
in
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last
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the last
month
saw a steady fluctuation among all five cities
and gained the second frequent
option for Correct quantifier usage
most frequent
australian
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Australian
people
.
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, residences
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residents
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who
bought
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buy
small
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the small
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sydney
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Sydney
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