The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.
The bar chart provides information about the change rates of international
students
among university graduates
in various Canadian provinces from 2001 to 2006.
Overall
, all Canadian universities showed a downward trend at the beginning of the period, followed by an upward trend at the end
of the period.
It is noticeable that,
New Brunswick’s Remove the comma
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graduates
rate was about 7% in 2001, being higher than Ontario’s rate by approximately 4%. Then
, it went up to almost 12% in 2006. Therefore
, the proportion of graduates
in Nova Scotia had a gradual decrease (6%), followed by increase
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an increase
nearly
11% between 2001 and 2006. Change preposition
of nearly
In addition
, the proportion of international students
in British Columbia rose as many students
as graduates
from Nova Scotia in 2006.
By contrast
, the percentage of graduates
in Alberta was less than 4% in 2001, but it increased (6%)in 2006. In 2001, Quebec’s students
had a gradual decrease. However
, the figure experienced a steady growth almost
8% in 2006.
The proportion of Manitoba Change preposition
of almost
graduates
decreased as many students
as in Newfoundland and Labrador. Then
, both of
universities experienced the same growth in 2006.Change preposition
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