The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The bar chart gives information relating to the amount of
electricity
produced and consumed by the top ten nations in 2014. It is obvious that China and the United
State
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recorded the
production
and
consumption
dominating over the other countries. Another point worth mentioning is that all of
ten
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countries consumed their
electricity
reasonably, except for
Germany
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. Regarding the data of China and the US, the former took the lead in the
production
of 5398
billion
kWh
and
consumption
of 5322
billion
kWh
, which was followed by the latter producing 4099
billion
kWh
and consuming 3866
billion
kWh
.
Therefore
, there was a large gap between the top two countries and a huge gap with the others. With regard to the remaining nations, ranking in the top 3 was Russia which produced 1057
billion
kWh
and consumed 1038
kWh
. In terms of
production
and
consumption
, the remains including Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany, and Korea recorded the amount of
electricity
ranging from 450
billion
to below 1000
billion
kWh
. It is noticeable that Germany could have insufficient
electricity
due to
its
consumption
excessing
production
, at 582.5
billion
and 526.6
billion
, respectively.
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