The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The table shows how much people spend on food and drinks, housing, clothing and entertainment from their monthly revenue in five different regions.
Overall
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, Housing gained the highest amount of income in the United Kingdom and Other countries. Spain spends the least amount on clothing.
To begin
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, for food and drink. Turkey dominated the other nations at 36%; followed by Spain exhausted at 31%.
Germany
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spends a small proportion of Salary at 22%.
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, a large amount of their salary is spent on housing, which was the first priority given by people who live in the UK at 37%.
Germany
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and France accounted for 33%, and 31% respectively
at the end
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of the month. Looking at the remaining essential parts,
Germany
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's expenditure on Clothing at 15%, which led to the rest of the nations at under 12% . Coming to the
last
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one, all countries were given the far most priority to entertainment.
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,
Germany
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provided only 19% of their Savings and other countries under 15%
at the end
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of the month.
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