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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the word. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons relevant

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the word. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons relevant
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The pie charts compared the proportion of
water
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 used industrially,
argriculturally
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agriculturally
agricultural
 and domestically in six areas of the world.
Overall
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, the majority of regions used
water
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 mainly for agricultural purposes and less
water
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 was used in domestic households. Central Asia used 88% of
water
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 in farmland, which was the highest
water
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 consumption among the six regions shown, followed by Africa and South East Asia, which used 84% and 81% of
water
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 for farming purposes respectively. Europe used the lowest percentage of
water
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 in agriculture, with only 32%, less than half of Central Asia. The majority of
water
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 consumed in Europe was for industrial use, more than half of the total
water
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 consumption. North America ranked second in terms of
water
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 used in industries, 5% less than Europe.
Water
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 for industrial purposes only accounted for around 10% in
other
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the other
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 four places. South America was the biggest user of
water
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 in domestic households, accounting for nearly one-fifth of total usage,
while
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 all other five locations only used one-tenth of their
water
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 in domestic settings.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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