Task 1: The line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050.
The line graph shows the proportion of the population of different age groups in New Zealand between 1950 and 2050.
Overall
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it is clear that
the number of people aged 0-14 will increase and the growth of the other three age groups will decline.
In 1950, nearly 60% of the population was over 65 and around 20% was aged 25-45. People who were younger than 14 only accounted for 5% of the total population. In 1990, the percentage of residents over 65 Linking Words
rised
by 10%, Correct your spelling
raised
rose
while
the figure of 38-45 doubled to nearly 40%. Linking Words
By contrast
, a slight drop could be observed in 0-14 and 25-37.
In 2050, it is predicted that the proportion of citizens over 65 and aged 25-37 will decrease by 20%, from 70% to 50% and from 20% to around 0%, Linking Words
while
the number in 38-45 dropped a little. Linking Words
Conversely
, the state aged 0-14 increased drastically from 2% to 20%.Linking Words
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