The charts gives information about the rate of electrical using for different purposes and how much time spent by the owner of houses in the year 1920 to 2019 in a country.
The line graphs illustrate the trend of electrical
appliances
ownership in Change the noun form
appliance
households
and the number
of hours
per week
spent on housework from 1920 to 2019. Overall
, the amount
of Change the quantifier
number
households
owning electrical appliances significantly increased between 1920 to 2019, while
the number
of times per week
spent for
housework sharply declined.
The percentage of Change preposition
on
households
with refrigerators noticeably rose from zero percent
in 1920 to one hundred Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 1980 and Change the spelling
per cent
level
off at Wrong verb form
levelled
this
amount
until 2019. The amount
of Change the quantifier
number
households
with vacuum cleaners also
sharply went up from thirty percent
to one hundred Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 2000. Change the spelling
per cent
Likewise
, the number
of households
owning washing machines markedly grew from forty percent
in 1920 to seventy Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 1960, fluctuated between sixty to seventy Change the spelling
per cent
percent
between 1960 to 2000, and slightly increased to above seventy Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 2019.
Change the spelling
per cent
On the other hand
, the amount
of Change the quantifier
number
hours
per week
doing housework per household dramatically slumped from 50 hours
per week
in 1920 to 20 hours
per week
in 1960. The number
of hours
gradually dropped from 20 percent
in 1960 to 10 percent
in 2019.Submitted by nattaporn.vibha on
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