You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows the average daily maximum temperatures for Auckland and Christchurch, two cities in New Zealand, and London and Edinburgh, two cities in the United Kingdom. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph provides information about the maximum daily average temperature of certain two
cities
in New Zealand and the United Kingdom from January to December.
Overall
, temperature variations in four cities
occur in the middle of the year
, primarily from May to September. Meanwhile, the two cities
in New Zealand begin and end the year
with warmer weather than the United Kingdom.
Temperatures in Auckland and Christchurch range from 25 to 18 degrees
Celsius
from January to April. In contrast
, the cooler months in both cities
begin in May and end in September, with temperatures ranging from 10 to 15 degrees
Celsius
until it warms up again. Although
Christchurch remained lower in condition than Auckland throughout the year
, the gap between the two remains relatively small.
London and Edinburgh, on the other hand
, see polar opposite weather patterns, with January in both cities
beginning at around 5 degrees
Celsius
and rising to up to 15-20 degrees
Celsius
in July. In comparison to New Zealand cities
, the United Kingdom has a warmer climate between May and September, with temperatures averaging 20-22 degrees
. Finally
, Edinburgh and London finish the year
with about 6 degrees
Celsius
before the new year
begins.Submitted by mjdf0930 on
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