The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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During the year 1918, the percentage of
people
owning their own accommodation
was far less than the one that rented their accommodation
. It shows about 76% of people
rented their home
. About 22% of the Fix the agreement mistake
homes
people
have their own accommodation
. In 1939, the number of people
owning their accommodation
increased to about 31% but it is still not as much as the 68% of the people
having to rent their accommodation
even though it decreased. The amount
of rented and owned accommodation
stayed the same during 1953. The owned accommodation
then
continues to increase from 31% to about 41% as the rented accommodation
decreases to around 59%. In 1971, the amount
of rented and owned accommodation
were both 50%. After that the percentage of people
renting their accommodation
while
the amount
of people
owning their own accommodation
beats the rented one. During 2001 the amount
of Change the quantifier
number
people
owning their own accommodation
slowed down to 69%. Then
, in 2011, it decreased to about 63% while
the rented accommodation
increased from around 31% to 36%.Submitted by twiggseducationbdg on
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