Some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holidays.

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It is commonly argued that some bosses want to contact the
employees
all the
time
even on their days off. (template) that the disadvantages of
this
statement outweigh the advantages. On the one hand, there are several benefits of contacting
employees
all the
time
. In general, most
o
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officers are required
too
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to
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probably respond and it is important to
maintaining
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a connection with the
employees
during their off-hours in case of urgency. It is
also
possible to say that
instead
of waiting for the employee to return from holiday, the employer can contact him urgently to complete the task beforehand without wasting any precious
time
.
For example
, some signaturestypese of jobs like doctors, event managers,and accident insurance ask for the optimal process, the convenience.
On the other hand
, there are a lot of drawbacks
in
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this
.
Firstly
, everyone
need
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their "after
work
"
time
for themselves and or their own relationships
such
as family. If one person
spend
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too much attention on
work
, they do not have any quality association, they live like
zombie
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because
without
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,without
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work
, they are
noting
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nothing
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at all.
Secondly
, uninterrupted connection
make
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employee
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the employee
an employee
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feel annoyed and stressed, which lead to bad health, mentally and physically. No one loves their job 100%, most of us just
work
for the salary and use it to pay for certain needs. Contacting more than usual
seem
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like
draging
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dragging
the worker out of their true reality, and the question is: is it imperative? If contracts of companies do not mention that
employees
have to cut off everything else and force them to receive calls or emails 24/24, they could not support to do
.
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To sum up
, maintaining
the
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contact
between
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with
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people at
work
is important, but each
of
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company
need
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needs
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to
considerate
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consider
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this
term because the disadvantages are more than
advantages
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the advantages
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Enhanced communication
  • immediate problem-solving
  • emergency situations
  • increased productivity
  • real-time feedback
  • project management
  • customer satisfaction
  • employee burnout
  • job satisfaction
  • mental health
  • professional and personal life boundaries
  • stress
  • autonomy
  • workplace morale
  • turnover rates
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