The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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Consumption patterns are similar for three products, photographic film, toys and CDs, where British people spend
most
. with more than $160,000 in each category and Germans are the lowest spenders, paying less than $150,000 in each. The amounts of money French people paid for CDs and photographic film are approximately $158,000 and $165,000 respectively, the second most among Correct article usage
the most
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countries. French and Italian people show similar interests in toys, with similar consumption of around $158,000.Correct article usage
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