You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel, in their feedback, participants at the meeting told that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear Sir or Madam,
The participants liked the gym, pool, and bed in the hotel, but the participants
are
unhappy about the Wrong verb form
were
food
because the food
served
very slowly, and the taste Add a missing verb
was served
is
awful. In the buffet area. There Wrong verb form
was
was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
a
cockroaches Correct article usage
apply
in
the table. The Change preposition
on
manager
should be improve
the Change the verb form
improve
food
in the future. For example
, the manager
should tell the chef about standart
operating Correct your spelling
standard
procedure
about the Fix the agreement mistake
procedures
food
. The chef has aware about
the quality Change preposition
of
food
and customer behaviourChange preposition
of food
..
If they make Replace the punctuation
.
...
mistake
again and repeatedly, they should be fired in Fix the agreement mistake
mistakes
this
work. The manager
should be evaluate
himself and Change the verb form
evaluate
dont
blame others. The CEO of Correct your spelling
not
hotel
must Add an article
the hotel
a hotel
selective
Add a missing verb
be selective
to choose
the Change preposition
in choosing
manager
properly. Manager
must choose quality chefs, they can select via CV or credibility on social media because Fix the agreement mistake
Managers
that is
very important. And mental
health and attitude towards work must be selected. Correct word choice
Mental
Manager
can create a bonus or incentive system if there are satisfactory results.Fix the agreement mistake
Managers
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,