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You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel, in their feedback, participants at the meeting told that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future

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Dear Sir or Madam, The participants liked the gym, pool, and bed in the hotel, but the participants
are
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were
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 unhappy about the
food
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 because the
food
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served
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was served
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 very slowly, and the taste
is
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was
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 awful. In the buffet area. There
was
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were
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a
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apply
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cockroaches
in
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on
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 the table. The
manager
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 should
be improve
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improve
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 the
food
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 in the future.
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, the
manager
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 should tell the chef about
standart
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standard
 operating
procedure
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procedures
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 about the
food
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. The chef has aware
about
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of
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 the quality
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food
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of food
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 and customer behaviour
..
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.
...
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 If they make
mistake
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mistakes
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 again and repeatedly, they should be fired in
this
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 work. The
manager
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 should
be evaluate
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evaluate
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 himself and
dont
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not
 blame others. The CEO of
hotel
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the hotel
a hotel
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 must
selective
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be selective
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to choose
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in choosing
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 the
manager
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 properly.
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Manager
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Managers
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 must choose quality chefs, they can select via CV or credibility on social media because
that is
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 very important.
And mental
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Mental
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 health and attitude towards work must be selected.
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Manager
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Managers
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 can create a bonus or incentive system if there are satisfactory results.
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Compliments
  • Ambiance
  • Professionalism
  • Hospitality
  • Quality
  • Variety
  • Freshness
  • Catering
  • Menu options
  • Dietary requirements
  • Feedback
  • Survey
  • Collaboration
  • Improvements
  • Rectify
  • Gastronomy
  • Culinary
  • Hospitality industry
  • Client satisfaction
  • Constructive criticism
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