The three pie charts compare the composition of four different meals, namely breakfast, dinner, lunch and snacks, in terms of three nutrients, namely sodium, saturated fat and added sugar.

The three pie charts compare the composition of four different meals, namely breakfast, dinner, lunch and snacks, in terms of three nutrients, namely sodium, saturated fat and added sugar.
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compare the composition of four different meals, namely
breakfast
,
dinner
,
lunch
and snack, in terms of three nutrients, namely
sodium
, saturated fat and added
sugar
.
Firstly
, The data is on average percentages of
sodium
, saturated fats and added
sugar
in typical meals consumed in the USA.
Secondly
, In added
sugar
, in
breakfast
it is 16%, in
dinner
it is 23%, in
lunch
it is 19% and in
snacks
it is 42%.
Thirdly
, In
sodium
, in
breakfast
as well as
snacks
it is 14%, in
lunch
it is 29% and in
dinner
it is 43%. In saturated fat, in
breakfast
it is 16%, in
dinner
it is 37%, in
lunch
it is 26% and in
snacks
it is 21%.
To conclude
, there
is
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great
differnces
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difference
differences
in
breakfast
,
dinner
,
lunch
and
snacks
. The above information describes
about
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the three nutrients, namely
sodium
, saturated
fast
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fat
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and added
sugar
.
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