The line graph grap illustrates the changes in employment trends over a period of 70 years in the United States
The line graph graph depicts the number of employment trends in the USA over 70 years; in a variety of work which are A agriculture, Manufacturing and we can observe that, the figure of people who work in Agriculture is to compared with other careers,
services
.
overall
, that clearly can be seen the percentage of employees in services
and Manufacturing are the two jobs people prefer from 1977 to 2025.
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the rate of Add a comma
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services
and manufacturing grew dramatically.Although
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agriculture began at 80% in 1977 to decline by 40% Remove the comma
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at the end
of the period , the rate of the services
dawning rate started gradually to peak at 80% in 2025.in order the
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the large proportion of people working in Fix the infinitive
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services
until 2025.Submitted by Ssaraan2017 on
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