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Some people today believe that the world increases in population is unsustainable and will eventually lead to a global crisis. Other people believe that world population increase is necessary and beneficial as it creates the growth of the world’s economy and society. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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people
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 become an essential
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part
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 of our life.
However
, there is no absolute agreement on whether growth in population should be beneficial or unsustainable. A commonly held belief is that
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worlds
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 economy and society are
increases
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 every day only
due to
 the
fact
thatthe
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that the
 amount of population. As evidence of
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 they point to
a
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 percentage of successful individuals nowadays, which is rise' up every year.
Due to
 the
fact
 that every year
world's
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 populations increase.
Furthermore
, teenagers are
become
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 more productive and motivated at the present time. It could be explained by the
fact
 that nowadays there are a lot of opportunities, which gives a chance to be successful.
As a result
, it leads to a bright
future
 for
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worlds
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 economy and society.
On the other hand
, some
people
 claim that there are a number of chances for global crisis rather than for
successful
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future
.
For example
, they may mention that it will be hard to keep
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 eye on everyone, chiefly if it will increase in
number
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a number
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 of
people
.
In addition
, lies in the
fact
 that
current
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 government
begins
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 to make more robots
which are
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 can easily replace a human in various types of
job
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.
Therefore
, our world may be full of
people
 which is
finally
 can be
a
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 beginning of chaos and tough time in the
future
 time. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account I would argue that with
rise
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up
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in population there can
also
 increases
of
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in
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 chances for a better
future
 with
a
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the
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 growth of
economy
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the economy
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 and society.
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