The line graph show of amount of carbon dioxide emissions in 1976 to 2007 in four countries united Kingdom, Sweden Italy and Portugal.

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Given is a graph indicating some information regarding the proportion of carbon dioxide

emission

in four countries UK, Sweden, Italy and Portugal over the period of 29 years. The rate is measured in Metric Tonnes (

Overall

while

the

co2

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CO2

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generation increased in Portugal and Italy over the surveyed period, the two other countries witnessed a

decreased

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. The other highlighted point is that

United

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the United

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Kingdom had the highest amount of

co2

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CO2

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emissions. After a steady trend

from1967

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from 1967

to 1977, there was a gradual decline in

co2

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CO2

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emission

by the people living in Sweden, by roughly 1.5

until 2007. Increasing from approximately 8.5

in 1967 to just above 10

in 1977 and reaching its peak, the

co2

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CO2

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emission

in Sweden faced an exponential drop and got to its lowest point in 2007. Despite some negligible fluctuations ,the

co2

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CO2

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emission

soared

form

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from

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1.5

in 1967 to approximately 4.5

in 1997 in Portugal it stabilized at 4.5

from 1997 to 2007.

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The line graph show of amount of carbon dioxide emissions in 1976 to 2007 in four countries united Kingdom, Sweden Italy and Portugal.

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