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The line graph show of amount of carbon dioxide emissions in 1976 to 2007 in four countries united Kingdom, Sweden Italy and Portugal.

The line graph show of amount of carbon dioxide emissions in 1976 to 2007 in four countries united Kingdom, Sweden Italy and Portugal.
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Given is a graph indicating some information regarding the proportion of carbon dioxide
emission
 in four countries UK, Sweden, Italy and Portugal over the period of 29 years. The rate is measured in Metric Tonnes (
MT
).
Overall
,
while
 the
co2
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CO2
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 generation increased in Portugal and Italy over the surveyed period, the two other countries witnessed a
decreased
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. The other highlighted point is that
United
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 Kingdom had the highest amount of
co2
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CO2
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 emissions. After a steady trend
from1967
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from 1967
 to 1977, there was a gradual decline in
co2
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CO2
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emission
 by the people living in Sweden, by roughly 1.5
mt
 until 2007. Increasing from approximately 8.5
mt
 in 1967 to just above 10
mt
 in 1977 and reaching its peak, the
co2
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CO2
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emission
 in Sweden faced an exponential drop and got to its lowest point in 2007. Despite some negligible fluctuations ,the
co2
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CO2
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emission
 soared
form
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from
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 1.5
mt
 in 1967 to approximately 4.5
mt
 in 1997 in Portugal it stabilized at 4.5
mt
 from 1997 to 2007.
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