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The graph shows the actual and predicted percentage change in employment in the UK, by education level.

The graph shows the actual and predicted percentage change in employment in the UK, by education level.
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The graph shows the actual and predicted percentage change in employment in the UK, by education level. The data
in
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is
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 on no
school
 certificate, high
school
, bachelor's
degree
 and Master's
degree
. In no
school
 certificate, in 1990, there was 0, in 1995 there was around -5, in 2000, there was -6, in 2005, there was -7, in 2010, there was -10, in 2015 there was -11, in 2020 there was -15 and in 2025 it's -16. In high
school
, in 1990 there was 0, by 1995
in
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it
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 was -1 in 2000 it was -3, in 2005, there was -4, in 2010, there was -6, in 2015 there was -9, in 2020, there was -11 and in 2025 it was -18. In Bachelor's
degree
, in 1990, there
was
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were
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 0, in 1995, there
was
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were
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 3, in 2000, there
was
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were
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 11, in 2005, there
was
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were
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 9, in 2010, there
was
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were
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 11, in 2015, there
was
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were
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 around 8, in 2020, there was 12 and in 2025, it is around 14.
In
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master
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master's
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degree
, in 1990, there
was
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were
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 0, in 1995, there
was
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were
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 1, in 2000, there
was
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were
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 around 5, in 2005, there
was
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were
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 10, in 2010, there
was
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were
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 21, in 2015, there
was
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were
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 23, in 2020, there was 28 and in 2025, it is more than 30.
To conclude
, the above information describes
on
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apply
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school
certificate
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certificates
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, high
school
, bachelor's
degree
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degrees
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as well as
 master's
degree
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degrees
show examples
.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words school, degree with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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