The graph shows the actual and predicted percentage change in employment in the UK, by education level.

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line graph illustrates the percentage

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between the actual and predicted amount of employment in the UK from 1990 to 2025.

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, the master's degree and non-certified schools show negative

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and high school and bachelor's degree holders show positive

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by the end of 2025.

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the line graph, the number of students who are qualified with a bachelor's degree rose by 10% in 2000, and it fluctuated until 2015, after it might increase by about 15%

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during ten years.

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, the education level in high school gradually increased 10% gap till 2005 and it had increased rapidly to 25% within five years.

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, it will be increased to 35% in 2025.

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, the students with master's degrees do not much

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in all years it seems always the same amount. Despite the fact that most students got their school leaving certificate than predicted level and it approximately minors 15%

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in 2025.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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4 paragraphs

158 words

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