The graph shows the actual and predicted percentage change in employment in the UK, by education level.

The graph shows the actual and predicted percentage change in employment in the UK, by education level.
The graph below illustrates how employment in the UK is going to change in the future,
although
the actual statistics
is
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also
presented.
Overall
, there have been several changes. The most noticeable is the growth in high
school
education. The percentage of educated people showed an upward trend,
while
the amount of no-educated people experienced a downward trend. In 1990, it seems that the percentage of nations with and without education was equal.
However
, in 1995 the number of people with high
school
and bachelor certificates slightly increased. In 2000, there were more employees with bachelor's
degree
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degrees
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, albeit it is obvious that еhe percentage has fluctuated all over the period. In the meantime, the amount of high
school
graduates users grew steadily till 2005, and
then
significantly
surge
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. The number of workers with no
school
сertificate gradually has declined, and
then
is going to disappear by 2025. The master's degree graduates have remained unchanged, with almost no change in
its
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Vocabulary: Replace the words school with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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