The graph shows the actual and predicted percentage change in employment in the UK, by education level.
The line graph demonstrates the estimated and recorded employment proportion in the UK
rely
on education level between 1990 and 2025.
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based
Overall
, the percentages of high school or Bachelor's degree
increased Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
whereas
the remaining group decreased gradually overtime
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over time
Moreover
, their proportions will continue to incline or decline as their past trends.
In 1990, there were no employees with any certification programs, however
, the percentage of Bachelor's degree holding
employees increased Add a hyphen
degree-holding
around
10% in 2000Change preposition
by around
,
and fluctuated at Remove the comma
apply
this
level until 2015. It will increase by 5% in 2025. On the other hand
, the ratio of employees with high school graduation certificate
gradually increased to 10% in 2005. In 2010, it rose approximately 25% before climbing 30% in 2020.
Despite the fact that non-educated citizens and people with Master's degrees had the same rate of employment in 1990, Fix the agreement mistake
certificates
disparity
between them increased over decades.Add an article
the disparity
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